A novel abandoned. Reminiscing about UPLB, life and road trips, including old poems I wrote during the '80s. And newer materials, poems, pics, sites, sights and sounds.
Wednesday, October 05, 2005
[poem] haiku (2)
haiku (2)
restless rustle in the night moans and whimpers rain pelting the hut
2 comments:
if your hut's too close
to your neighbor's domicile
the moan isn't rain
Yes, but the poem mentions only the hut, and the rain, and implies the moan coming from the rain pelting the hut.
--andoy
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